მეგობრებო, ჩვენმა ერთ-ერთმა იუზერმა, კერძოდ კი
Sokka-მ, დაიწყო მხატვრული წიგნის წერა და მთხოვა, რომ შეფასების მიზნით თქვენთვის გამეზიარებინა წიგნის რაღაც ნაწყვეტი, ასევე ყდის ესკიზი, რომელიც თავად სოკამ დახატა.

ჯერჯერობით, შეიძლება ითქვას, ეს მოკლე მოთხრობაა, მოგვიანებით კი ავტორი მის განვრცობას გეგმავს.
მაშ ასე, წაიკითხეთ, გაეცანით და შეაფასეთ.
565 Years: Story of MarkA Short Story by Guram Rukhadze Jr.
Part 1: Life - Where am I?
- Don't worry, you're safe, Mark.
- What? Who are you? Where am I?
- Don't you recognize me, Mark?
- You... you look familiar, but...
- MARK! Wake up, you'll be late for school! - shouted his mother and Mark quickly awoke, it was that dream again, Mark was walking, walking to nowhere and then he saw that image, that familiar image which he couldn't remember.
Mark is a 17 year old boy, living in Region 7 of United Nations territory, he lives his average life like all the other kids his age, but deep inside, Mark is different, Mark longs for something else, he doesn't want all of this, he wants freedom. Mark wants to live out of the system, to live by himself, in some uncharted place, but sadly, those kinda of places no longer exist on Earth, Earth is over-populated.
The Year is 2257, nothing much has changed, people made new discoveries, but life stays the same, system is the same. Population number: 21 billion, all of the lands are taken, some people don't have a place to live, massive hunger, illness, everything resulting in death, but yet, population grows.
Mark is a lucky fellow, at least he was born in a family with wealth and he lives a normal life, he often sees the poor and homeless people outside the walls of Region 7, he tries to ignore it, not to think about it, but he can't. He doesn't have many friends in his school, he does have someone to talk to, but none to call a "Friend", his thoughts are different, he is different and thus he cannot bond with anyone, cannot make friends.
And so days turn into months, months into years and time passes, Mark is now 22, he has a job, an average job, like everyone else, still no change in Marks life, still he longs for that freedom though, a freedom he cannot achieve. At his work place everyone is working like a drone, like a programmed robot, they do not share marks dreams, his longing.
Many more years pass, Mark is now 30, yet still alone, no wife, no family, his mother passed away few years back, but Mark has a plan, he knows he cannot achieve his dream now, so he works hard and gathers money, he is saving it.
Year is 2291, 34 Years have passed, Mark is now 51 and still alone, though working, working hard to get his payment, which he saves.
Year 2320, Mark is 80 and in his death bed, he has given his will to the proper authorities and in it is written: To carbon freeze Marks brain and unfreeze in 565 years and find a proper android body, his hard earned money was only enough for 565 years. Thus Mark passed away, he saw the light and he walked to it...
Part 2: After-LifeChapter 1 - Mark... Mark...
- You again, what do you want from me?
- Look at me Mark? what do you see in me?
- You... your me, but how can this be?
- You will find out Mark, but not now, you will have to wait. Now, walk to the light Mark...
- Subject: Mark.
- Yes, can you believe that this brain is 565 years old, Janice?
- The anroid body is ready doctor, his funds covered the HA-5 model.
He heard these unfamiliar voices while unconcious, he did not know what was going on, it was like he had only slept for few hours:
- Greetings.. um.. Mr. Mark, are you feeling well?
but Mark didn't reply, as if he forgot how to speak.
- I understand Mr. Mark, this procedure is tough one to go through, because of all these new technology we're going through, but yet you believed in us and invested in our project to be revived as an anroid! For that we thank you Mr. Mark.
- Where... where am I? - He said, but he couldn't recognize his own voice, it was not his own, it wasn't even a human voice.
- What is going on? I can't feel my body!
- Mr. Mark, you have to understand that you are no longer the being you once were, it is year 2885, You are in Nex Tech. laboratory, you were revived as an anroid, model HA-5, your funds covered this version and it is quite Human-alike. I know it is hard for you now, this may seem as a dream, but that feeling will pass, you will soon realize, you will find it not to be a dream.
Soon Mark realized that it was real, he looked in the mirror and saw his new body, made of wires and metal, I can't tell what kind of feeling Mark experienced at that moment, but it passed away and he embraced the truth, after all this is what he wanted, all those years ago.
After few weeks Mark left the facility, when he came out of the laboratory he saw a beautiful sight: Birds flying by Towering sky buildings, sun shining down on his new face and beautiful blue skies, now those hours of sleep seemed like an eternity truly. Mark was given an apartment in the city as a part of Anroid Program, but he wanted to find out about his life-long dream, if he could find the place of his desires.
This post has been edited by Drakula on 25 Dec 2010, 15:47